The light of the candle suddenly dies
And silent darkness all around you flies.
Reflection of emotions of what has been
and what’s not there, those that mean
nothing but much to only you in there
soul that has been lost not knowing where.
Streetlamp marks contour of your face
And the night’s pain takes you in embrace.
Remnants of those memories of long lost
angelic innocence, haunt you that almost
make you lose your breath unconsciously
gasping for air to lift yourself up to slowly fly.
Flashlight shows a strange world being part
Of sweet dreams tonight to host your heart.
Hopes that vanished under life’s Dark Knight
reappear in illusions and you without fight
accept them true and blind to lead you now
silently on that mystery path no matter how.
A magical path is sparkling away and ahead
And with your eyes closed a tear you shed.
As little voice of your past clings from behind
tells you about wonders you’re unable to find
so the magic slowly dies, the music stops to rhyme
case you’re all alone for the rest of the time.
2 comments:
You managed to touch my soul, take it's most darkened part, draw it out, break it again, and remind me of all the pain whats in there...
In other words: a beautiful work of melancholy and suffer.
And I love the metaphors and images you use, the chose of places and the most I think I love the very last two lines, cause it's a great ending.... I envy you.
hey there again
I did check your blog as well but didn't spend enough time there to read though everything or most of it..i did notice that we have a very similar style though:)
thank you for your words about my last poem, yeah i do believe the last two lines are the most powerful...it's actually been a while since i last wrote anything but the other night inspiration came again and this is what became out of it:)
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