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Thursday, April 1, 2010

Ode to pain

Oh passionate pain take me away


Strangle me in your glamorous way

Take my soul in your grace it vanishes anyway

Lead me, I know you won't betray 



Oh passionate pain take me away

Laugh at my face when I start to get pale 

Hurt me I know you want to play

Lead me wrong in this new born day



Oh passionate pain take me away

Twist me around push me to the edge of fail

 Make me crumble and astray

Lead me till I loose all my faith .



Oh passionate pain take me away

Wrap me till I’m  numb and plain

I can see my blood on your nails

Lead me, I start to feel how it was again.



Oh passionate pain take me away

Love me more and leave me less   
  
Light  my life with lonely 

Lead me, take me, make me flyaway!


This poem is about wanting to feel something..because the worst is when you don't feel anything..you even take pain..just to be able to FEEL 






2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Hey,
I just came up against your blog and due to time I had to overflew it but especially this text just striked me.
Some years ago I'd have not understood those lines but for everyone of us the moment in times comes that completely changes you.

Your words exactly say in such a beautiful way what I haven't felt and thought rarely.

While reading I shed a tear or two and remembered in my subconsciousness, I think some points in time that on the one hand have deeply hurt me but on the other make me some kind of felicitously while thinking of them.
Crazy...

I hope to find some time to read the other things you wrote =)

Greetings,
Martin from Germany

friendlyheart said...

hey Martin

thank you for your words..it always gives me a pleasure to find out what others think of my writing..and what effect has it on them

though i wish no one understood how this feels..

you are welcome to read the other things i wrote, hope you have an enjoyable time while doing so :)